Canceled creepy999's Artist Application
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From a cursory look:
Things I like:
1st I like the use of the supports for the rafters.
2nd use of various types of boxes and store containers.
3rd the subtle use of different blocks in the actually structure of the building. ie the rope wrapped logs
4th armor stands usage. not over used but gives small details
Things I think you need to work on:
1st yeet the mats. that leather texture causes my eyes physical pain every time I see it. Dirt, dust, hay, and straw mats are all ok but the leather needs to go.
2nd Need to learn how to use interior walls and dividing walls to break up the space. Each space (especially if it for large scale storage) should have a purpose. In this case you could put all of a certain type of box or produce or object into one room and have a completely different item elsewhere; think like your mom's pantry. She sure knows where everything is and everything has an order to its placement.
3rd. Need to learn how to use storage furniture to its maximum utility. Boxes should not just be strewed everywhere. Free Standing shelves, hanging shelves, wall hooks, etc. all have purposes for different types of objects. you can also use said furniture as a pseudo dividing wall.
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I think you're on quite a good direction! I'd say; trying to push to be more active in mainworld projects and see if you can find some plots to do. Both to show you're reliable and you may improve quicker working along side people. If you don't know where to look so dose there exist boards on the Times where you can see open plots. Good luck!
another plotsquared, not really a big thing but still a build. armor stand battle of felucia, star wars
ps: for some reason i cant submit the plots im building, so i cant claim new ones. so now i have so stick to the good old freebuild(this means more star wars)
ps: for some reason i cant submit the plots im building, so i cant claim new ones. so now i have so stick to the good old freebuild(this means more star wars)
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Hello staff members and other app stalkers, I was working on a plot in Plotsquared (at -45 -1150) right now, but since it is no longer accessible i cannot continue building it. I would be thankful if someone could copy it to Freebuild. (the creepyland 5100 7350)
(btw sorry for the absent time, right now i am a bit busy in my life and don't join often. I would come back full shift as soon as I can!)
(btw sorry for the absent time, right now i am a bit busy in my life and don't join often. I would come back full shift as soon as I can!)
Hello ppl!
build be like:
1. A setpiece that took me way too much time (never doing 50x50 again)
2. A small plotie in Agar/Adul (have no idea what is the difference)
build be like:
1. A setpiece that took me way too much time (never doing 50x50 again)
2. A small plotie in Agar/Adul (have no idea what is the difference)
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Hi Creepy, good job on completing your set piece, that looks like a lot of work, I like how you did your palisade, its hard to do that with the current textures in gondor pack. Also nice cliff gradient x3 . A few comments I have for improving your plot maybe:
Your cliffs are a little bit overly smoothed, try adding erosion lines to it to make it look more broken and less singular, there are examples at /warp henneth annun
Your houses seem to be an original style which is great, but some need some more exterior details to break up some flat walls
Your trees would look more server style if you used less leaves and had more air. Especially with the spruce leaves, they can get really noisy and busy which takes too much attention from everything else.
Also add some undergrowth in the form of small trees FERNS and large bushes in places and group what you have into patches instead of scattering them.
Have fun,
Tally ho